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Some people find that life is a nightmare;
Some can only see just fear, pain and rage.
Some people twist in the grip of despair.
Some madly curse at their self-imposed cage.
Others brave the storms which churn up their seas,
And turn to meet the passionate winds that blow.
They pilot their small craft just as they please,
And seem to know no fear in doing so.
And when their memories rain bloody tears
Into the midnight waters, flecked with foam,
They make their heart a helmsman, and it steers
Unscathed through the tempest to its dear home.
So have self-belief, though turbulence is rife;
One's inner convictions will make one's life.
©2008-2010 ~objoyful
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Author's Comments

A short poem inspired by my good friend :iconkaidenmoon:'s piece Warped Sajou no Uta, which can be seen here: [link]

(Heh, it's only the second sonnet I've ever attempted to write - hence the insipid title! ^^;)

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:iconmysterrya:
Ohhhw I really enjoyed it to read! You have a really creative mind! *takes as favo*

I also try to let myself inspired by a lot of things, but I never can create a good version of poem! =/
Fine thing.
:iconshinigaminecromancer:
wow thats really good

i especially like the last line "ones inner convictions will make ones life"
i believe that, that is very true = /

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:iconcass-chan:
That's deep. Very deep. I :heart: it.
:icontsukikothewolf:
wow, awesome job! :clap: i like how the last line kind of sums it all up :D
umm....this sounds kind of random but what can i call you? as in your name is guess :XD:

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:iconsouleion-lucaz:
oooo.. this is very heartfelt and emotional! i do like this! kinda corresponds to me :XD: anyway, i tried my first try at writing two poems and i drew a picture to go along with them ..... it wouldnt let me upload it to here ._. and i really liked them.... maybe it cuz i typed the poem it all in on photoshop and edited it..... i dunno it just wont let me something to do with the file!! >.<; on another note... i like this! :D

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:blackrose: 天使と昆虫間 -- 私達はある -- Between Angels And Insects, We Lie. :blackrose:



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Batteh wink at you!
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:iconrockets101:
see now thats y i rite poetry. ^_^

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A l337 n1nj4 wuz just here but he's so l337 we all had no clu. O_o
:iconkaidenmoon:
:hug: thanx so much for this--i am so honored that a such great poet (and wonderful friend :aww: ) would find something of worth in my weird painting!

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Played the Nocturne of Shadow!
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:pointl: :pointr: :pointr: A :pointl: :pointr: :below:
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Warp to the Graveyard?
:pointr:OK :boogie:

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:iconobjoyful:
Thank you so very much for the compliment and the favorite! It makes me really happy that you enjoyed reading it! ^^

Yes, it's good to be open to inspiration - I find it in all kinds of things! And even if you're not so much a poet, you are a truly excellent artist! ^^

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The latest in thank you pics: [link] :D

My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D
:iconobjoyful:
Thank you so much - I really appreciate the compliment! And yes, I think that a lot of what one believes and one's attitudes make a large difference in what one's life actually is.

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The latest in thank you pics: [link] :D

My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D
:iconobjoyful:
Thank you for :heart: it - that makes me really happy! :hug:

Awesome new avie, by the way - beautiful! ^^

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The latest in thank you pics: [link] :D

My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D

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