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Afternoon Dream . . . by ~objoyful:iconobjoyful:



Remember that quiet afternoon,
When the shadows lay sleeping on the sun-warmed grass,
And I asked if you would grant me a boon;
And you smiled and nodded and whispered your "yes;"
And we walked hand in hand through the silken air -
Laughing and sharing our hearts' small dreams -
And I brushed the cherry petals out of your hair;
Was it so perfect as it now seems?
©2008-2009 ~objoyful
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A small poem about a fading memory, inspired by my good friend :iconbluestiger:'s lovely photograph, which can be found here: [link]

(Thanks for letting me include the link! :hug:)
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Oh, that's so well-written. And it goes really nicely with the photo! Great job. :3

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-my wonderful camp roommate.
Thank you so very much! ^^

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My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D
^^ It's so nice of you to mention me :hug: I love the poem :)
could a moment be more pure
could a love care any more
if this is a sickness ill live with out a cure
for no longer will my aching heart be soar
and yes i do remember back then
back in the day when it all still mattered
back in the day when the sun still shined
back in the day when we never ever faltered
back in the day when we were all still blind
could our moment be any more fine
could it be any more pure



had 2 add my 2 cents. ^__^
ths peom is very well writen i like it alot. somthin bout the wordin hits me. mucho <3

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this poem and the photo ...are soul-mates! xD :lol: dont ask... im not so into poetry or any type of writing really but i really like this one! when i read it it gave me a flurry of beautiful imagery (in my imagination) >_> a very inspiring poem this is! and the photo is so very pretty! both are very well done :) i think i might sketch the image i had in my mind iunno.... :)

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:blackrose: 天使と昆虫間 -- 私達はある -- Between Angels And Insects, We Lie. :blackrose:



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What lovley, inspiring poems you write. It's like you added the breath to the picture itself!
such a beautiful poem...:happycry:

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I love poems and yours blow me away:D do you like Edgar Allan Poe?:)
Well of course I must mention you - your photo was the inspiration! Anyhoo, you're very welcome, and I'm really glad that you love the poem! :hug: :heart:

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The latest in thank you pics: [link] :D

My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D
Ooo, one of the things that makes me happiest is when someone who's not that into poetry likes one of my poems - that just makes me feel really good! :aww: I'm very glad you like the photo too - I hope you let my friend :iconbluestiger: know! :) And woot - I hope you do feel like sketching the image it put in your mind, 'cause I'd love to see it! :D

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My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D

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